Friday, 8 August 2014

Show Don't Tell

In The Past Couple of day we did 2 show don't tell this is one of them. I think I did awesome but I need more punctuation

Shown don't tell

PURPOSE to describe WALT show not tell in our writing
Last week we did show don't tell with Miss Smith to show our emotion. I think I will need to add sentence

She was frozen like a ornament

her heart was bursting

she was left breathless

she had pins and needles in her hands and feet
from staying so still

huuuuuuuh its coming!

Friday, 6 June 2014

Success Recount

You are going to write a descriptive recount, telling our audience about a time you were successful.  
Describe a time we were successful
Success Criteria
Have you remembered…
- start with something that was said or thought
- Use punctuation (capital letters to start sentences and names and fullstops to end)
- to put everything in the right order
- use describing words and lots of detail.
- Re-read it to check it makes sense
“Today I thought in my head when i walked to the bowl Is the day I'm gonna drop it.
It was Sunday morning, calm wind nice Belize nice and sunny when I went to the park.
When I went to the park there were heaps of people like they were watching Tony Hakes.
There it is big and round when I went up to the bowl, the wind started to get rough I could taste the wind burning my tongue.When I look down I was thinking should I or not, I  drop it and it felt so
cool I so heaps of people cheering for me.

Friday, 30 May 2014

Dvolver Movie

we had to make a hurt free movie using dvolve movie maker.We had to make a hurt free movie to show that we are hurt free.Here is mine I hope you like it.

Room 17 Assembly

On Wednesday my class Room 17 had a assembly. Mihi and I did the himine,karakia and mihi. I felt like some one was spying
on me When I did the karakia and himine. after that We did the  bongos and some girls made up a dance I think it was cool I was the leader of the bongos. All of the Kaikohe West School cheered for us I felt like, I was a famous person.  

Thursday, 29 May 2014

Fun With Five

Today we did a movie on Vimeo called Fun with Five

Fun with fives from Room 17 on Vimeo.

Monday, 19 May 2014


WALT  Make a slide use a story from Oxford owl. I choose Titanic because I seen the movie I think It is awesome but titanic about this big ship it was crossing London to New York.