In The Past Couple of day we did 2 show don't tell this is one of them. I think I did awesome but I need more punctuation
Friday, 8 August 2014
PURPOSE to describe WALT show not tell in our writing
Last week we did show don't tell with Miss Smith to show our emotion. I think I will need to add sentence
She was frozen like a ornament
her heart was bursting
she was left breathless
she had pins and needles in her hands and feet
from staying so still
huuuuuuuh its coming!
Posted by Maurice at 09:49
Friday, 6 June 2014
You are going to write a descriptive recount, telling our audience about a time you were successful.
Describe a time we were successful
Have you remembered…
- start with something that was said or thought
- Use punctuation (capital letters to start sentences and names and fullstops to end)
- to put everything in the right order
- use describing words and lots of detail.
- Re-read it to check it makes sense
“Today I thought in my head when i walked to the bowl Is the day I'm gonna drop it.
It was Sunday morning, calm wind nice Belize nice and sunny when I went to the park.
When I went to the park there were heaps of people like they were watching Tony Hakes.
There it is big and round when I went up to the bowl, the wind started to get rough I could taste the wind burning my tongue.When I look down I was thinking should I or not, I drop it and it felt so
cool I so heaps of people cheering for me.
Posted by Maurice at 11:00
Friday, 30 May 2014
On Wednesday my class Room 17 had a assembly. Mihi and I did the himine,karakia and mihi. I felt like some one was spying
on me When I did the karakia and himine. after that We did the bongos and some girls made up a dance I think it was cool I was the leader of the bongos. All of the Kaikohe West School cheered for us I felt like, I was a famous person.
Posted by Maurice at 11:01
Thursday, 29 May 2014
Monday, 19 May 2014
Thursday, 15 May 2014
clever, fun and friendly
son of George and Maudielove rippa rugby, maths and cooking
sometimes I feel lonely, joy and hurt
Is afraid of girls,zombies and butterfliesIs good at teamwork
want has parents to win the lotto. want to succeed everything I do.
live in kaikohe
think Tuatara is the best
Posted by Maurice at 09:40
Friday, 9 May 2014
WALT Recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happened and how we felt.
Me and my friend were playing on our scooter, when my aunty asked “Maurice do you and your friend want to go to the park?” When we arrived at the park I could taste the rain. Me and my friend were dropping in on the ramps but there was one ramp that was on my mind. My friend told me not to but I couldn't get over it so I went up the ramp. I was about to drop in when my aunty shouted “don’t do it Maurice!” I should've listen to her but I dropped in anyway. I was so busy dropping in on the ramp that I didn’t see the water. The water made my wheel slip and I slipped off my scooter and I hit my eye so my aunty and my friend ran with panic and she helped me up so next time maybe I’ll listen to my aunty and my friend.
Posted by Maurice at 12:19
Wednesday, 16 April 2014
What was your best moment in term one? Why?
My best moment in term one is when I got my chrome book. Because it felt like Christmas when I got my chrome book.
What was the most important thing you learnt?
The most important thing that I learnt was when we learnt how to use basic stuff on the chrome book. Like how to file make copy and putting it in a folder.
What subject do you do the best in this term and why?
The subject I did best in term one is maths.Because I did not know how to reversibility and doubling and hafting
What subject did you not do so well in and why? The subject I did not do so well is reading on the chrome book.Because you will have to put the work sheet on one tab and the book on the
Did I manage my time wisely this term? How? e.g. finishing most tasks, working independently. I didn't manage my time wisely this term.Because I been away couple of time and my teacher told me to catch up.
What can I do differently next term to improve? Why? I need to improve Coming to school ever
day.Because I can manage my time every day so I don’t have to catch up.
Give yourself smiley faces out of 10 to show how well you have done this term:☺☺ ☺ ☺ ☺ ☺☺ ☺ ☺ ☺
Posted by Maurice at 12:22