Friday, 8 August 2014

Show Don't Tell

In The Past Couple of day we did 2 show don't tell this is one of them. I think I did awesome but I need more punctuation



Shown don't tell

PURPOSE to describe WALT show not tell in our writing
Last week we did show don't tell with Miss Smith to show our emotion. I think I will need to add sentence

She was frozen like a ornament

her heart was bursting

she was left breathless

she had pins and needles in her hands and feet
from staying so still

huuuuuuuh its coming!