Friday, 8 August 2014

Shown don't tell

PURPOSE to describe WALT show not tell in our writing
Last week we did show don't tell with Miss Smith to show our emotion. I think I will need to add sentence

She was frozen like a ornament

her heart was bursting

she was left breathless

she had pins and needles in her hands and feet
from staying so still

huuuuuuuh its coming!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Maurice! I like how detailed you are with your writing. Very nice work. But would you mind if you could tell me how to make an audio boo? Thank you! But anyways Nice job!